what next

So if anyone is reading this and wonders where I was going with that weird story I'm really not sure and frankly I was getting kind of board with it. I feel like the Sandra character was a slam against women when really she was only intended to be a slam against a certain kind of women. So at any rate the part I was stuck on is how I get the main character (myself) to be running from the Sandra's mafia father. I was either going to have myself witness a mafia execution or I could offend Sandra by refusing her advances. The last one didn't make much sense as Sandra doesn't seem the type to feel gratitude or the type of person who would be attracted to me. Although her father did pay off my debts. I did that just so I would not be burdened while running for my life. After that happened at the restaurant I was going to have them send a bomb to radio shack while I was working and blow up the store. I of course would hear the ticking and get in the fed ex truck and make a daring escape from the hit men who were there to finish the job. Honestly who has the patience for such things, perhaps I'll continue the story but don't hold your breath I'll follow up soon with something else.

paradox

Imagine spending a lifetime plotting revenge on someone only to find out he is your future self and that when he stole your girl it was just to fulfill a lifetime of longing.

PS. Sorry I haven't updated in a while, I'll gladly update the story and keep going just so long as someone somewhere leave a comment on one of the posts.